A part of you is still left in me,
In all the forms it can be,
like these curves on my lips, which stretches with just a thought of yours,
like this fallen eyelash, waiting to be heard of,
like your memories which are buried six feet under my chest,
like those arms of mine where I wrapped you with your head against my heart,
A part of you is still left in me,
In all the forms it can be,
Like this poetry of mine where I weave your thought.
Like your zillion of particles flowing within my blood.
A part of you is left in me, a whole of you is within me.
very beautifully penned, am speechless.
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I am humbled Jyotirmoy Thank you so much.
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Elegant metaphors. The last line is the best of all.
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Any appreciation from a writer like you means a lot.. Thanks 🙂
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painfully beautiful…longing after he is gone! awesome!
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Thanks Shweta.. Truly few things few feeling never shed away. How you have been?
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I have been travelling 🙂 Nice to be back to blogging and reading Mansi 🙂
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Very beautiful lines. Love, pain, pleasure, explore every dimension! 🙂
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Thank you Prakash.
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Oh, we can’t shed few things. They are immortal within us.
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Seriously few things remain engraved forever. Glad to see you here.
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Your poetry as well as posts are always wonderful! I have nominated your blog for the Bloggers Recognition Award. Please find the link at:
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I am Glad Savita..Thank you so much..humbled 🙂 Will check
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It is so simple and so beautiful!
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Thank you so much Amit
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Waw. This is a lovely read. 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by Ashish. Glad you liked it
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